Feedback on our music video

The first section of the feedback sheet was about the elements that worked well in the music video.

• Editing-  Gives it a good pace, hectic just like the song is.
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• Performances-  Look genuine, un staged and fun.
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• Its just fun and funny.

The next topic that is on the sheet is about things that need developing.

• Park bench shots are too long
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• Park slide scene could have been sped up , it drags on a little bit
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• Gun kissing scene should have been the last cut

Fortunately  the next and last section was the things that don't work and no one filled it out which tells me that there were no parts of my music video what were a total disaster.